WickedJuti, July 27th, 2010, 3:26 pm
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- This comic is also my first attempt on screetones :) I like most of the result ^^

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sakurasaki92, July 27th, 2010, 5:12 pm
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- so pretty!
LAWL his face...

Cloud97, January 14th, 2012, 8:41 pm
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Some constructive criticism - Ok the fight was epic!!!! But I wish you'd show the end of it, because one shots are supposed to lead to that final strike that destroys it enemies (and its supposed to be the most epic part of the one shot). But your just ends at that climax which was really disappointing. Also your story telling was kind of lacking; the dialog was bland, and the story wasn’t clear. Like why was that monster after the Jon and Marie, what purpose did the Jon and Marie have too the story, who was the ninja/warrior, why was she protecting the two, who was the dark lord, and what happened to Jon and Marie. These are things you should have asked your self and added to the story.

Sorry if i sound harsh, just helping a fellow mangaka.

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